
This drawing was strange for me to do. None of my layout drawing classes informed me how to draw a diagram like this. This is a good jumping off point for me tho. Now that I have the hang of this type of drawing, I would like to re-do it and make it better. For now, this is my rough. The shot that I want to use this set for is in the upper right hand side. When I first made that beat I felt that It would be powerful if the shot happened outside in the rain. But this scene is when Jake really takes in the fact that is brother Tom is a controller, and that Tobias is stuck as a hawk for the rest of his life, I think it would be more powerful if the shot takes place inside jakes room. His room is not a safe place, but more of a reminder of his failures. Jake is trapped in this life that he never wanted, and feels helpless to save his brother and friend. So I want his room to be a reminder of his old life, and a prison all at the same time. Is that coming across? No I don't think so, but I know that I will work it out.